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well done!
but i can feel the awkwardness in your text: you still doesn't know properly hw to use your words; it takes time to write things as we want to
cool poem eve
I write (an amateur at best though ^^") and this whole poem describes how I feel about writing.....but I still dont really know!
The end just made the whole thing.
"Can you tell me?"
I can't give you any response more than I love it. I don't know, maybe I'm not as good as a writer to be able to give you any critique but I'm just speechless. Amazing work, really.