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the metaphor of the succubus made me smile. then when you brought it back to the universal theme that we all desire love i was already nodding quite heavily. wonderful piece
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Mood: Yearning ~symphonyoftheheart Dec 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you couldn't have said it better.
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~Felix-Anima May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
While I cannot disagree more with your take on love, however depressing, this is a very good poem. It has a very subtle tone to it, which I think, captures perfectly the morbidity of love that you're trying to convey, and you manage to create some very powerful images with your choice and positioning of words.
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~TheAmericanRealist May 31, 2012  Student Writer
I see this and see truth. Hard truth, but truth nonetheless.
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~LightOverpowers58 May 31, 2012  Student Writer
Its good, a rather twisted yet true depiction of the emotion called love.
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