deviant art

Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]
Download File
PDF, 26.0 KB
more ▶

More from =Shadowsoflosthope

Featured in Groups:

Details

December 5, 2012
26.0 KB
Sta.sh
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 25
Favourites: 512 [who?]

Views: 3,811 (0 today)
Downloads: 58 (0 today)
[x]

It appears you don't have PDF support in this web browser. Download PDF

:iconshadowsoflosthope:
The cover image is a stock image from deposit-photos (did not feel like has to deal with art theft assaults). The name is kinda of trivial and cryptic but i wanted to include the two main analogies i made within the poem (originally two but i merged them). Hope everyone likes.
Add a Comment:
 
love 4 4 joy 0 0 wow 2 2 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconartbybeverly:
Mood: Wow! *ArtBYbeverly Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful poetry :) I was sent over from Blue's recommendation :) Lovely work!
Reply
:iconshadowsoflosthope:
Thank you and i'm glad i was recommended :D
Reply
:iconartbybeverly:
*ArtBYbeverly Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome :)
Reply
:iconbluedragoneye:
Broken Glass

Broken glass pieces of sharpen shards
Cutting deeply reminding us of who we are
The glass are our shattered past
And our broken hopes and dreams
But they too have means
Painful lessons about life love and failure
Littering our lives path
We trail them after us and hope never to step
On another soul’s broken glass
But they do have beauty too
Drop them into the churning sea
Sit beside the sand and watch the magic began
Each wave pushing and pulling wearing each sharpen edge
Making a soft stone of glass a jewel of lessons lived
Soon they look like gems in our hands
Like a piece of rock candy covered in dust
From out of the pockets of grandmothers aprons
Sure life breaks us hearts minds and souls
But if we look out pass the storm clouds
Perhaps just then there will be a rainbow of broken colored glass



Your words are beautiful as a writers soul knows how to dance ink upon paper seas.............
Reply
:iconshadowsoflosthope:
.... i love it :heartbreaker: . That poem is absolutely beautiful. i truly think it out does it was meant to comment on. I especially love the theme. And thank you for the compliment :D
Reply
:iconbluedragoneye:
you are so very welcome Dance on Dancer of words :iconbowplz:
Reply
:icontheheek:
Mood: Love ~theheek Dec 16, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
awsome i love it
Reply
:iconangrboda555:
:iconlovesqueeplz: very nice! you can capture emotion so beautifully in such a simple way
but umm D for whore?
Reply
:iconshadowsoflosthope:
baw it was a screw up .
i had two lines d for dick
w for whore
But i thought the dick one was stupid so i cut it out but i must have messed up.
Reply
:iconangrboda555:
haha that's kind of funny ^^
Reply
Add a Comment: